Tuesday, November 16, 2010

Essay 4: Persuasive

My topic will be whether or not the new crack down in the NFL for helmet to helmet hits is beneficial.  I will probably take the side that it is beneficial, but I'll decide after I have all my information and sources together.  My main points could be how it helps (or doesn't help) the players, how it trickles down to college/highschool/younger players, and lastly how it benefits the NFL, or maybe the viewers.  Any thoughts?
Change..
three points...
1. injury--it's already a violent sport
2. bad example for younger players--you can jsut change rules for younger players
3. bad hits give NFL a bad image--what about other sports? i.e. boxing, hockey, etc

NFL Rule Changes: Helmet-To-Helmet Hits Will Lead To Suspensions

Suspensions for NFL players who commit helmet-to-helmet hits on "defenseless" players are coming, beginning this Sunday, like it or not.
NFL football operations executive Ray Anderson told ESPN Radio's "Mike and Mike in the Morning" earlier today that following a weekend of vicious hits to the head the league is going to act.
"We are committed to safety at the highest level," he said. "We're not going to be apologetic, we're not going to be defensive about it."
The league suffered a rash of helmet-to-helmet hits over the weekend. Brandon Meriweather of New England on Todd Heap of Baltimore, Dunta Robinson of Atlanta on DeSean Jackson of Philadelphia and James Harrison of Pittsburgh twice on Cleveland Browns players.
Here is the Meriweather hit.

The league is concerned not only about the hits, but about the attitude of defensive players who are cavalierly shrugging off fines. Former player Rodney Harrison, fined more than $200,000 in his career for excessive hits, exemplified that attitude. He got suspended once for a helmet-to-helmet hit in 2002.
"You didn’t get my attention when you fined me 5 grand, 10 grand, 15 grand," he said during the pregame broadcast for "Sunday Night Football." "You got my attention when I got suspended and I had to get away from my teammates and I disappointed my teammates from not being there. But you have to suspend these guys. These guys are making millions of dollars."
Anderson told "Mike & Mike" that the league feels it must go further to get players to live within the rules.
"We've got to get the message to players that these devastating hits and head shots will be met with a very necessary higher standard of accountability," Anderson said. "We have to dispel the notion that you get one free pass in these egregious or flagrant shots."
That likely won't sit well with all defensive players. That feeling has already been expressed by James Harrison, who defended his hits against the Browns.
"If I get fined for that, it’s going to be a travesty," Harrison said. "They didn’t call (a penalty) on that. There’s no way I could be fined for that. It was a good, clean, legit hit. … I didn’t hit that hard, to be honest with you. When you get a guy on the ground, it’s a perfect tackle."
I would expect that games around the NFL this Sunday will be flag-fests. Anything that even looks like a hit to the head is going to draw a penalty. Like it or not.

Monday, November 1, 2010

Essay Three Sources

"Causes." Obesity. Mayo Foundation for Medical Education and Research, 09 Oct 2010. Web. 20 Oct 2010. http://www.mayoclinic.com/health/obesity/DS00314/DSECTION=causes.
Updated July 8, 2010.  Written by Mayo Clinic Staff.  I would use this source again.

"Causes and Consequences." Overweight and Obesity. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 07 Dec 2009. Web. 12 Oct 2010. http://www.cdc.gov/obesity/causes/index.html.
Updated December 7, 2009.  Lists Sources: Content source: Division of Nutrition, Physical Activity and Obesity, National Center for Chronic Disease Prevention and Health Promotion and is a reliable website; I would use this source again.

"Defining Overweight and Obesity." Overweight and Obesity. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 21 Jun 2010. Web. 12 Oct 2010. http://www.cdc.gov/obesity/data/index.html.
  • Page last updated: October 8, 2010

  • Content source: Division of Nutrition, Physical Activity and Obesity, National Center for Chronic Disease Prevention and Health Promotion

  • this is a reliable website; I would use this source again.


  • Flegal, Katherine, Margaret Carroll, Cynthia Ogden, and Lester Curtin. "Prevalence and Trends in Obesity Among US Adults, 1999-2008." The Journal of the American Medical Association. American Medical Association, 13 Jan 2010. Web. 20 Oct 2010. http://jama.ama-assn.org/cgi/content/full/303/3/235?ijkey=ijKHq6YbJn3Oo&keytype=ref&siteid=amajnls.
    published january 13, 2010 and lists authors and the sources they used for their research; not biased.  I would use this again.

    "General Causes of Modern Obesity." Causes of Obesity. Anne Collins, 2007. Web. 20 Oct 2010. http://www.annecollins.com/obesity/causes-of-obesity.htm.
    This website does not list authors and was published in 2007.  I might not use this again because I am unsure if it is biased or unbiased.

    Keeler, Sharon. "Teen obesity and family environment." Medical News Today. MediLexicon International Ltd, 15 Aug 2005. Web. 20 Oct 2010. http://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/29129.php.
    The article date is August 15, 2005 and the author is listed, including her contact information.  It is not a biased article, but a little out of date so I might reconsider using it again.

    Lopez, Russell, and Patricia Hynes. "Obesity, physical activity, and the urban environment: public health research needs." Environmental Health. BioMed Central Ltd, 18 Sep 2006. Web. 20 Oct 2010. http://www.ehjournal.net/content/5/1/25.
    Published September 18, 2006.  Authors and sources for research are listed.  Not biased.  I would use this source again.

    McManamy, John. "Diet and Obesity." McMan's Depression and Bipolar Web. John McManamy, 2010. Web. 22 Oct 2010. http://www.mcmanweb.com/diet_obesity.html.
    Author is listed and the article was reviewed in 2008.  There could be bias because the author is speaking from experience, but he uses facts.  I think this is a credible souce that could be used again.

    "Obesity Causes." emedicine health. WebMD, 2010. Web. 20 Oct 2010. http://www.emedicinehealth.com/obesity/page2_em.htm.
    Copyright 2010, but the article has no date or author listed.  This is a reliable website without bias.  I think this source could be used again.

    Wieder, Robert. "Fatness and Friendship, Part I: Why do They Often Go Hand in Hand?." Obesity Causes. CalorieLab, 26 Aug 2010. Web. 20 Oct 2010. http://calorielab.com/news/categories/obesity-causes/.
    August 26, 2010.  By Robert S. Wieder for CalorieLab Calorie Counter News.  I would use this source again.